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Hi Oh S'mar,Your ideas are very strong, but I think there are some things you can change. In some of the sentences its says 'educating', but I think you should change it in order for it to make sense. Hopefully you can keep up the good work.Yours Sincerely,Fine
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Hi Oh S'mar,
Your ideas are very strong, but I think there are some things you can change. In some of the sentences its says 'educating', but I think you should change it in order for it to make sense. Hopefully you can keep up the good work.
Yours Sincerely,
Fine
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