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Tuesday, 23 September 2014

Why do people migrate to New Zealand: Oh s'mar

Our task today was to explain why people migrate to New Zealand. The skill we practised was to back up our information with evidence.

1 comment:

Fine said...

Hi Oh S'mar,
Your ideas are very strong, but I think there are some things you can change. In some of the sentences its says 'educating', but I think you should change it in order for it to make sense. Hopefully you can keep up the good work.

Yours Sincerely,
Fine

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